Fics like The Broken Loop : But for a Question Book One

One thing I've always wondered is: Why in the heck didn't Orsted ask Twelve-year-old Rudeus Greyrat whether or not he really was a servant of the man-god and why wasn't he initially afraid of him before Rudeus was attacked during Turning Point Two. This piece of fiction was written to answer those questions. Some things will line up with cannon pretty well, others won't some things will be my creation. I have completely re-written the first five chapters. After I catch up to where I was, this story will completely replace my other fic. Again, DO NOT READ UNTIL you have seen episode 11 of season 3, turning point four. The big bad is revealed in that episode. That is the only real spoiler. I feel the need to explain myself. I have the next few chapters done, they're ready to go. But my editor told me that the next chapter that I had would not work. It took them way longer to travel from the Red Dragons lower jaw, back to Fittoa. So I've been writing a fill in chapter. I have about 3,000 words more before I reach 10,000 but it's looking like it'll end up a little bit longer because I finally found something to write about..

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