Fics like Cupid and Psyche: Act One

Introducing Cupid and Psyche, a series about mind control, and using mind control to make love. In this first act to the series, introverted businesswomen Raven hires the dominatrix Hope to bring her under hypnosis, and immerse her in sexuality like she's never been before. This is my first time ever writing something like this, so please give me whatever constructive criticism you can. Like, serious, for the love of God give me some feedback. Anything. I need to know how I can improve myself. Based on an rp I had in Shamchat.

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